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Chips Yaoi 1 by ~ryne:iconryne:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Digital Media > Cartoons > Drawings

©2003-2010 ~ryne
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a little comic strip trial for our org's publication.

translations:
Panel 1 -
"If you really love the person, go ahead and tell her! That person probably won't get mad at you."

Panel 2 -
"Really?"
"Of course! Trust me, I'm the Expert!!"
"O-okay..."

Panel3 -
"Dude... I'll confess... I LOVE YOU!!!"

"*#$&*("

ja!

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~jessjess Oct 21, 2003, 5:08:21 PM
XD This is sooo funny and cute! haha awesome!
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~seiret Oct 21, 2003, 9:05:07 PM
Wahahaha... ka-yaoian nga naman oh.
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~kyameel Oct 22, 2003, 1:57:47 AM
This is funny and cute! :D

(and to think I have something against yaoi)

#ahem#

one thing though: since the 2nd guy already said "sige eto na" maybe you could just get rid of the "pre, aaminin ko na" and leave the "i love you" in the third panel. Kasi medyo naalangan ako sa pause and cont. ng sasabihin nya. Kung yung 3 words na lang ang nasa 3rd, mas malakas dating =D

just my two cents on the matter.

Pero still, cute sya. Pati title ah hehe

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~slayswift Oct 22, 2003, 2:54:32 AM
anak ng hweteng! sandali, baka ma-impeach ako kapag pinublish ko sa kami yan ah. wait. uhm, scary dude. hehehe.

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~kuro-inu Oct 22, 2003, 2:56:54 AM
omagas...

what's happening??? what happened to you??? NOOoooooo~

is this the result of the yaoi film showing?!? noo~ the end of mencom is nigh! :O_o:

hehehe..joke! nice strip! pero i agree with ~kyameel's suggestion..^^

puwede ring tanggalin mo na yung "s-sige eto na" sa 2nd panel since magiging redundant nga siya...or para rin matago pa rin yung punchline until the third...kase parang me binibigay na hint rin yun e..^^

la lang...comment lang...hehe..sige gawa rin ako comic strip ko kahit di ko trabaho yan...namiss ko trabaho ko sa hs paper namen e^^
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~ryne Oct 22, 2003, 3:34:51 AM
thanx po for the tip! i'll try fixing it [dunno kc if i saved the .psd file...]

^___^

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"She was my dream; if you touch a dream, it vanishes, like a soap bubble." - from Neil Gaiman's short story, Looking for the Girl

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~kyameel Oct 22, 2003, 3:37:04 AM
*crosses fingers*

Hope you did! :D

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coz life sucks half the time. ~:heart:
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~erisdoll Oct 22, 2003, 6:02:36 PM
May GAwd , siguro kung ako yan mamamatay tao ako kung yan ngyari sa akin !!!!!

cul siya ryan !!! tanong : ngyari na ba yan sayo ? speaking prom experience b ????

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~ryne Oct 22, 2003, 9:07:47 PM
nope! ^__^ thank god.

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"She was my dream; if you touch a dream, it vanishes, like a soap bubble." - from Neil Gaiman's short story, Looking for the Girl

[link] <-- My LJ
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